雅思口语P2 Describe a public place you think needs improvement（文字版）

The public place that I think needs improvement is the local park in my city. Indeed, I live in a part of the country where it is pretty much hot the whole year. Certainly people want to go for outdoor activities. It is very pleasant to go for a run in a park for example, breathe the fresh air, have a nice view while spending calories. Unfortunately, this park was damaged by the rain in the past years. This is sad because it was so beautiful, and with a lot of different spaces serving many purposes. For example, the basketball courts are ruined, with many holes on the floor, and the football pitch is also in a bad condition. We could also enjoy a good time in the open garden, with a wide-open land that could be good for picnics, walks, outdoor games and so on. But because of a poor maintenance, it doesn’t feel good to walk in the park anymore. People need to do sports, but they also need somewhere they can meet friends and spend some time together without necessarily having to spend some money. Thus, I believe that the local government should really renovate the park. It would benefit us all greatly.